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Shamefaced (Free verse) by Doug

Doggie dreams may seem absurd- to peoples complex reason, but a man's musing mind may seem the same- to the great god of Bloomington. And through the gray bar gauntlet of worst truth and spit, hateful stares flinging cum and shit- one just might meet Humiliation, but come time of timorous-tangled death- your sure to know Him well.

Caducus 2-Dec-05/1:51 AM
If more concise this could be good but as you're a bit of a dick for the way you critiqued my work I can't be bothered to waste my time.

A shame because your work isn't half bad but you moan about how many hits your getting and you leave comments like - "your work sucks big panther nuts"

Not the brightest crayon in the box are we.




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