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leah (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp

never weary again i shall be for she is the fire under my feet and for her i dance the daily dance and run among the others to clear a path for us so that one day, when her fire glows low and my feet grow tiresome we might sit, together and enjoy the hot coals that will endure us beyond our final breath

Crann Mascher 29-Nov-05/1:29 PM
Heavens. I just checked this out for the first time since I made a mean statement. The tone really took a turn for the worse. I've been called gay multiple times, but never by someone with such bad spelling. And that's really saying something. Best of luck.




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