poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Amber's Witness by cyan9.

cyan920 Nov 2005

A very good suggestion at that. I'd never come across that word before and it also would go in vein with the hint of narcotics that I was trying to add there. Its downside is that it takes out the rhyme from marks in the bark which speeds up the pace at that point. But I think I may use your suggestion and also bring the narcotic theme out a bit.