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Us Sinners (Haiku) by BrandonW

I know where you are. In heaven. I just hope that You are not alone.

zodiac 17-Nov-05/4:59 AM
A1: No, I just meant, oh like it's a big accomplishment showing that I assumed something. Big rip.
DOVINA: Exactly. Big rip.
ZODIAC: So why have you spent the last ten comments trying to "prove" it?
DOVINA: That's just what I always do.
ZODIAC: Exactly. And I appreciate how you stopped being a very realistic version of yourself about three imaginary comments ago.
DOVINA: Why thank you. Did I mention you're looking good today?
ZODIAC: You have now.

A2: Could God be anything less than totally cool? No. By definition.




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