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Beneath the Willow Tree (Free verse) by cyan9

Lying down with the arc of my back against the mounds of earth, weaving my vertibrae over each bump and clump of grass, of dirt, I inked my index finger and drew a symbol to draw mana from the sky. Ripples eminated from the connection, and through their vortex I found myself sucked into a tunnel, sucked towards one bright one light. As I twisted and turned through concave and convex, I awoke to a haze of brightness, I awoke and began to stare at the surgeons vest. Hurtling on a theatre trolley while doctors stitched together my brain, having been out cold for days, I couldn't remember my name. As I leant up to ask of my journey, my fate; ripples formed and the vortex sucked me further in. I was wrapped up in all the soft blankets the sun could offer, I was cradled and lulled into a soft warm bed, I awoke to the light of day, I awoke with light inside my head.

ALChemy 16-Nov-05/10:17 AM
Awwww. Have we so quickly resorted to name calling? Don't worry, you are so much better at insulting yourself with your inept ability to write a proper sentence with at least a seventh grade grasp of punctuation and capitalization. Congrats for spelling guess right this time.

Sure, we could run this thing into the ground but I've done this before with far wiser than you. Quite frankly, You have issues and nothing I can say or do is going to solve them or likely shut your ass up. So I'm taking the high road and conceding all arguments between us officially won by cyan9.

Are you happy now?

Nope, didn't think so.




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