ALChemy16 Nov 2005

Proper punctuation might help a little too. Try one of these (:) or ("") or just drop the damn period.

What do I think of your poem? It's not bad in an acid trip kind of way. You seem to portray the operating table as the dream and the nature scene as the world you wake up to. If that was your intent then good job. The average person would have gone the opposite route.
"one bright one light"???

In the future if you choose to make your biting comments then at least check it for faults. Nothing makes you appear to need a slightly more intelligence than a snide reply full of errors.