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Abba (Free verse) by oneglove

A father's gift Though trinket defined Is untold wealth To the child it finds And words so small Not understood Withstand the beat of time Moments spent And kind words spoken One day define the man I'll grow big and strong And learn to love Me and daddy, hand in hand

Blindpoetry 13-Nov-05/3:08 PM
Line 6: 'Withstand the beat of time' seemed out of place to me...
Could you explain how this ends the first stanza?




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