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The Hawk (Free verse) by Dovina

Where once the wolf was howling, sounds the howl of tires. Where once wild mustard, rank scent embitters air. Where once red-tail hawks soared watching for grass’s shiver, they watch atop poles for weaving pickups aimed for jacks and snakes. Then howl of tires sank like pebbles in city deep As tire owners scrubbed the air And mountains rose again as if howled for by the wolf. But abused beyond saving, a red-tail hawk confronts a gull for a french-fry at the city dump.

Dovina 13-Nov-05/6:37 AM
I’ve been trying to stop howling for years, but it keeps welling up uncontrollably.

I see how "like pebbles, city deep" improves rhythm, and in this case I may follow you there, though it goes against gut desire for meaning.

And my But in the ass end of this, yes that too should go, I think.




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