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the band (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Singing the song in my head, listening to every beat every rythm, ryhm and reason the bass is playing in the back rythm guitar is strumming its melody lead guitar is rocking a single my lips are touching the mic belting out my notes, my lungs bellow the last note plays, look up to the sky and from the crowd we listen to their hands applouding the band, the fans jump and kick i step off the stage, wishing this was real.

zodiac 8-Nov-05/6:06 AM
You wanna know how we knew you were 13?

Cause you say stupid shit like "Im sorry If a person with a higher intelect, as yourself, can not accept a poem that tells a story".

What patent crap. Obviously his disliking you has nothing to do with whether your poem tells or story or not, or even whether or not it tells a story we understand. Besides, of course we understand. We've all been 13 once, while you haven't been 26 yet. I don't mean to be negative, just don't say stuff like that anymore. And go out and try to have some, you know, experiences and stuff.




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