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Night on the Towne (Haiku) by Modulo

Softened haze, whispers. Silver, Brass, tapped announcements. Bright lights and Jazz Nights!

cyan9 7-Nov-05/6:10 AM
Much better than your piece High? Coo. Uses plenty of lively language that reminds me of dodgy cocktail bars. I'm not sure about the exclamation mark and the capitalization of jazz nights at the end, bit too much exclamation for my likings, anyway good effort.




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