poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A Joining Of Souls (edit) by Caducus.

INTRANSIT4 Nov 2005

The last stanza: Remnants of her remain? Yes, that's what remnants do. (Boooo Hissssss)
Lose the corny end rhyme.

"from beneath the lashes" ...(holds arms straight up, palms inward)