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Steak and Satin (Free verse) by Dovina

Tiny pearl earrings, delicate and black, concealed in flowing hair. Dainty ankle bracelet, almost hidden in lacy folds of broomstick skirt. Moving curls, tickling shoulders, induce seductive smile. I slip a shoe, slide a foot on side-calf soft, slither a hand to sense neat shape of knee. My little secrets. Sitting straight and proud, wearing nipples as jewelry, sensual, alone, with maybe a watching eye.

Dovina 4-Nov-05/11:08 AM
Wow, a comment on my poem. This can’t be Poemranker! This site is reserved for gut punches and shin kicks to the poet, the poem being there just for openers. Still, I see your wanting more body parts and less decoration. Most men do. It’s a girly kind of feeling I was trying for here, not really designed to be seductive to men. Still, a few men out there understand this sort of female sensuality with ourselves. And, no, they’re not all gay.

As for the lefsa in your pants. I must first ask if your mother was preparing Norwegian Potato Lefsa in the kitchen while you were doing chin-ups on the counter.




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