anonymous10 May 2002

Oh Bad Poetry,
painful and dying on the monitor

This is actually better than the first one I read. You seem to know that poetry has something to do with nouns and verbs, and that's something learned.

The language is a little too "poetic" for me. You know how "descriptive" the writing is on the sides of cereal boxes? Any time you read the side of a cereal box, I guarantee you can tell the writing is phony. Something just doesn't feel right, because the adjectives are placed there with a dishonest intent.