poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac.

<~>19 Oct 2005

I love this:

I want to tell you I fear
falling into religion

and

the scaffold
of proper nouns, greetings, and expansive gestures -

but the sentence seems convoluted to me, and i am not sure of your meaning. not that i need to be sure, it's jsut that i want a clearer reason for these bold statement to link in with that lasting, last image.