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The End (Free verse) by Caducus

My author of ten nibs wrote biographies on me then read in my eyes the prologue of our love. When God wrote her ending each time I cried I became unreadable, a tragedy of blank pages. I have to end to continue all she left me was chapters, and I will remain closed waiting for my end of days. Sunset falls like 'Seppuku', spewing its end from its swords of light as nights mackintosh waits Like a reaper I had prayed for But lived because I promised her. If only I were closed If only I were Sunset I could fall skywards Into your arms Where I could set spectacular And in my eyes you'd see 'The End'

<~> 14-Oct-05/10:00 AM
i don't think it is. the fact that you are wishing in the next stanza implies that you are living, and i don't think you need to make the promise to.

nice job, cad.




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