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Escape (Free verse) by Heather Dee

Take a moment to close your eyes, Breaking all unwanted ties. Freeing your mind of needless thought, Escaping the battles you have fought. Take a breath in and exhale all pain. Solitude and peace you have to gain. Don’t resist from letting yourself go, A deeper understanding to all you know. Freedom to expand your clarity of mind, Now is much easier you will find

ALChemy 7-Oct-05/2:13 PM
Yeah I considered those but I thought you'd say "Yeah but those aren't real words". It's nice to see someone loosening up the grammar noose every know and then.
You mean you can actually understand what Thom Yorke is saying.




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