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Escape (Free verse) by Heather Dee

Take a moment to close your eyes, Breaking all unwanted ties. Freeing your mind of needless thought, Escaping the battles you have fought. Take a breath in and exhale all pain. Solitude and peace you have to gain. Don’t resist from letting yourself go, A deeper understanding to all you know. Freedom to expand your clarity of mind, Now is much easier you will find

zodiac 7-Oct-05/6:45 AM
My girl (a dinosaur, but extincter)
Had a thing for toying with my sphincter
Til one day, quite naughtily,
She entered it bodily.
We still talk, though her voice is indistincter.


Also, consider rhymes with her (or 'er), like "binked her", "Colonel Klinked 'er" or "hyperlinked 'er".

A great user of cliches is Thom Yorke of Radiohead. He actually never sings anything that isn't like a tv-movie.




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