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Thorns (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Nothing is spoken. The door is simply shut. The television gasping for clarity is switched off, allowing the room to offer itself to moonlight. Breathing seems amplified, air cold and indifferent and all matter lay dead in the shifting darkness. We are equal in blackness. Shadows separate across the bed reaching for trousers and nightgown, the clumsy religion of cowering to cover what is not concealed. I could say something, that is my right but they did not expect me so soon and there are things they need to talk about. So I open the door take a last look at the living room furniture, the Titian imitation on the wall and leave my house.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Sep-02/1:03 PM
well! goddamnit! he keeps picking on me about the drugs and stuff, and well..it hurts...you know?...deep down inside of me somewhere it realy pains me...and embarasses me too...i don't want the entire world to know that i shoot smack straight into my cock and dry stroke my pets in front of my child not to mention nipple tape my girl prior to a good feces rub down...i mean realy...how wold i even begin to start allowing the therapy to work..with all of this negativity being thrown around...it's just plain uncooth and immature..and i..i..i..forgot what i was saying..what was i talking about?...oh yeah.. driving a tractor can be fun if you wear sun screen..right? exactly..




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