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Pathological (Lyric) by Miggy

And because of the lies… I’m left here with something to find Trying to look whether your mind Is floating under the weather Receiving hope that it would be better Or denying the state of normality Like your every vision isn’t a fallacy Only avoiding the hate left within me But you’re just the person who Meets and greets and leaves and grieves As if you’re the victim From this relationship thing And everyday cause of you The red I bleed Reminds me where the road of truth will lead And because of the lies… I can’t even look into your eyes Without seeing the deceit of all those other times At the point where the fall’s too steep The closest thing to soft would be the concrete After the white will surround within To make sure that you can’t do it again Haunted with your imaginary friends So you can’t picture what the mirror says Behind, top to bottom, and side by side Cause it’s being not your fiction But more what the world is like And because it’s so true My woeful creed Reminds me where the road of truth will lead And because of the lies… The fervor rage won’t let me be kind Choking myself for being so blind Empty-handed for doing the right At least I’ll have the clearest of sights But there’s still a warning to spread People heard the words spoon-fed Poison with a mental equal of lead As the culprit hides behind The densest messes of ego-made fences To ignore every man And all of their wasted expenses But I go out of my way To plant the seed Reminding me where the road of truth will lead

Heather Dee 6-Sep-05/2:31 AM
This is absolutley beautiful!!!!!
I am so very impressed by the words in this poem.




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