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Jack (Free verse) by Dovina

I was a branch, void of leaves, naked and brittle, adjusted to cold, and could outlast winter. He fell gently on me, like a snowflake, not needed, but warm, like a spring leaf returned, when a leaf must die, yet he rested softly, a repairer of breaches, where no lack I saw, restorer of forgotten paths, creator of places dwell in.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Aug-05/11:39 AM
As a poeme, it's cack. Like a snowflake, but warm? So not like a snowflake, then? No. Like a spring leaf. Well which is it? Both. And a repairer of breeches.




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