Dovina18 Aug 2005
That works for me too.
I think all the stanzas have a submissive beat. The angel is submissive to the Teacher and to his task. The woman is submissive to being comforted by the angel, even as he fails. And the woman in the last verse, who is finally comforted, is submissive to the angel. Could you explain what you mean?
The full stop at the end of s2 is there for grammarâs sake. But I see how it breaks the flow, and may do well to disappear.