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War (Sonnet) by zodiac

Sensible in most things, Girlie buys those packs of yeast whenever she shops. She has certain assumptions when it comes to - oh what would you call it? - husbandry, I guess, the order of things: a dog, a made bed, a centerpiece, those million, no, billion lives saved for some use I can't imagine - to trip my hands, maybe, while looking among stacked bins of flour, soda and sugar for - I forget just what - for something edible, then. Or say for one great final baking-day. Or say we keep our peaces, the kitchen of our love as fertile and earth-pungent as new graves, as a bombed field. And yet we have no bread.

Niphredil 3-Aug-05/7:11 AM
Fascinating. But I admit I am confused; too many swirling motives here. Aside from the central bread theme, I'd be happy if you were to clarify

"the order of things: a dog, a made bed,
a centerpiece, those million, no, billion lives

saved for some use I can't imagine - to trip
my hands, maybe..."

Who are these billion lives? a country? a nation? just people? not even human? who saved them and why?




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