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The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) (Free verse) by drnick

Peaches sitting in the attack... waiting to attack a lone plum A Doe, a deer! It swizzles thru your brain canals A blue raccoon is nibbleing at your flesh WHATCH OUT! ~~~Charlie in the trees~~~ hit the fuckin' floor, man. FREEDOM! Look everyone! It's Mr. Peanut!!!! He wants an orgasm.

LilMsLadyPoet 31-Jul-05/10:04 PM
Not sad! It means you get invited to come click glasses with the chosen few! (LOL) I have always found it ironic that my very favorite poems just kinda roll out, and usually are better left un-messed with, and usually take just as long as it takes my hand to scribble it onto paper! The more I work and rework, the worse they become. If it doesn't flow, I know to just put it away, or throw it away, or add it to the scraps that can later be looked at to catapult me into a writing frenzy! LOL! (I DO mess around with my puncuation...ugh! I DO need to find a miniature editor/English-teacher to sit on my shoulder!)




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