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This Just In... (Free verse) by drnick

What's in the news today? The best stories of our days, Blood death and voilent years, Dollar bills can dry your tears, It's a dark world, or is it? Can reality be so explicit? Who would know behind these screens, Expierience the world in electric dreams, Feel yourself just waste away, A story I heard on the news today.

LilMsLadyPoet 31-Jul-05/7:21 AM
Expierience would say to use spell checker before posting...(just a hint!) Needs a comma after blood. A period ofter tears. That said...I just don't see the point of this one.
"It's a dark world,
or is it?
Can reality be so explicit?" <could be cut out, without any ill effects.




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