Replying to a comment on:
a love not meant to be
(
Free verse
) by
nentwined
one coil at a time, apologies loop higher; a steady spiral--progress, a mix of liquid hope and concrete fears combed together, a smooth surface; a jug that I fill with love and offer to you ignoring the cracked and leaking base
http://mulberryfairy
29-Jul-05/10:45 PM
nice job- you really captured the simultaneous hope and awareness of flaws that we bring to relationships
Track and Plan your submissions
;
Read some Comics
;
Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001