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a love not meant to be (Free verse) by nentwined

one coil at a time, apologies loop higher; a steady spiral--progress, a mix of liquid hope and concrete fears combed together, a smooth surface; a jug that I fill with love and offer to you ignoring the cracked and leaking base

Dan garcia-Black 28-Jul-05/7:22 PM
We all have a crack in our base but we keep on trying. As another poet on this site said earlier, "Why have the choice if we never choose?" Keep sticking your hand into the clay, Netwined. You'll get there someday.




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