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a love not meant to be
(
Free verse
) by
nentwined
one coil at a time, apologies loop higher; a steady spiral--progress, a mix of liquid hope and concrete fears combed together, a smooth surface; a jug that I fill with love and offer to you ignoring the cracked and leaking base
Dovina
28-Jul-05/7:02 AM
Why must such a love be not meant? Or not workable? "combed together" seems odd for liquid and concrete.
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