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Gratitude (Free verse) by Dovina

On summer hills, a heavy bull eats brittle brown grass, and every bite tastes good. I see it in his face and wonder if he remembers the green blades of winter, or finds a duty of the living to pleasure in what the dead cannot, a gratitude for the running and mating that made this small pleasure possible.

Dovina 3-Jul-05/10:37 PM
Although I have no qualms about using "pleasure" as a verb, I’m changing it to "enjoy" because I’ve used pleasure twice.




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