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Gratitude (Free verse) by Dovina

On summer hills, a heavy bull eats brittle brown grass, and every bite tastes good. I see it in his face and wonder if he remembers the green blades of winter, or finds a duty of the living to pleasure in what the dead cannot, a gratitude for the running and mating that made this small pleasure possible.

Caducus 3-Jul-05/1:27 AM
Rockmage - this isnt BAAAADDDDDD.

It really isn't.

Would you please be a gentlemen and say why you think so?

I admit the language is heavy handed in parts but like me she's trying to express herself and pick subjects hardly tackled.

I see a lot of beauty in the stuff you write and thats the real you not this pseudonym(s) of yours.

Worth a 6 at least.




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