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Gratitude (Free verse) by Dovina

On summer hills, a heavy bull eats brittle brown grass, and every bite tastes good. I see it in his face and wonder if he remembers the green blades of winter, or finds a duty of the living to pleasure in what the dead cannot, a gratitude for the running and mating that made this small pleasure possible.

Shuushin 1-Jul-05/11:47 AM
I don't know D, I'm having trouble with the whole cow thing with the visibly enjoying the grazing to the running and mating.

Now that you've gone through the trouble of showing me his enjoyment I can't seem to anthropromorphize him to a plausible degree.

I love cows, I think they are cool and have a personality - but - I don't know. Another animal maybe?

Incidently I found out today why they put rings on cow's noses. The other reason.




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