Shuushin29 Jun 2005

okay - I haveta make an ammendment.

The start "It amazes me..." might be improved apon. YES I KNOW, I've done and do from time to time a similar thing - but I try.

The thing is that you want the poem to convey the amazement - why broadcast it. What if you just killed the first 3 words??

Then remove "Still keeping" - it is... unenglish.

But I like the piece very much.