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cup-cake (Free verse) by cpill

Oh my fickle ambition makes me not makes me sleep nights to no rest till tomorrow I am never happy to thirst on plans for fulfilment for-ever-on-ward with no hope in my heart but 'hope' itself will blue lines meet red lines? All this brown rice when happiness is such a cup-cake

cpill 25-Jun-05/1:40 AM
I guess its not very linier, more felt than understood.




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