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The tender side. (Free verse) by darby pyn

When I channel you deliver me possession and let me be flattery for my plagiarism. I steal the sides to give texture to an empty well. your arms give a beautiful aesthetic to hollow spaces. in between the shadows of my thoughts where too many questions are gray without recollection you stay firm. my ornament of desire. you could never be a ghost in my home.

darby pyn 20-Jun-05/12:19 PM

I know my writing seems vague and without foundation
but the subject of love is so overused with the same
old cliché in most poems on about it I tend to
be more abstract and less generic with my metaphors.
each person has their own interpretation and that’s
fine. I understand what I write. if others don’t
that’s OK. I hope their are scenes, verses that catch your
eye but dissecting it to pieces for everyone’s approval
and making it more tangible for mass opinion is bullshit.
I like your writing and appreciate all critcism.
constructive or not. I can take it. : )
I liked " unclean" allot.




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