darby pyn20 Jun 2005

I know my writing seems vague and without foundation
but the subject of love is so overused with the same
old cliché in most poems on about it I tend to
be more abstract and less generic with my metaphors.
each person has their own interpretation and that’s
fine. I understand what I write. if others don’t
that’s OK. I hope their are scenes, verses that catch your
eye but dissecting it to pieces for everyone’s approval
and making it more tangible for mass opinion is bullshit.
I like your writing and appreciate all critcism.
constructive or not. I can take it. : )
I liked " unclean" allot.