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Father’s Day (Free verse) by Dovina

Let every man who ever had a father Consider: I knew a man who, when old, grew bitter when young, he forgave As he aged, he complained when young, content The older he got, the more he criticized when young, he encouraged When old he revealed his core

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 19-Jun-05/7:17 PM
I disagree with your premise. I am sorry you aren't aware of many old men that don't fit this stereotype.

I'll try not to write about a woman's relationship with her mother to avoid the same trap.




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