Replying to a comment on:

Students (Sonnet) by Blue Magpie

So beautiful these children that I teach, once one learns to look beyond the thorns the needle teeth and bifurcated horns they use to keep their minds beyond my reach. Like candles burning in an ancient church they cast their awkward shadows in my soul; rough diamonds tossed into a beggar’s bowl; strange-seeming answers to a heart-felt search. They drag me to their battlefields and cry, “See now our dreams, our laughter and our tears, and share with us the horror of our fears, for we are bright and wish to touch the sky. Give us your heart! For we would learn to fly, and have no love for those who fear to die.”

Dan garcia-Black 16-Jun-05/7:37 PM
I hear children's voices reading lines 12 through 14. I would hope that there are teachers in this country who might listen to their students as well as you seem to listen to yours. I admit that lines 7 through 11 are a bit off putting in that the images have already been overused in the daily media. But all in all, it seems to be an honest effort.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001