LilMsLadyPoet14 Jun 2005

Smiling...someone after my own heart....looks like the stuff I wrote a LONG time ago! Fly! I am sure you meant to end with! Great line> I was born an avian child, /the winds intrigued, the skies beguiled.
Form and format and puctuation and word choice...well...it needs cleaning up, but time will give you the polish you need...keep writing!