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Haiku String of the Bee (Haiku) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk

Bee on my arm sniffs deciding am I nectar? Decision made Flies away into a day filled with flowering, stamen dripping sweet Legs packed with pollen love for queen dominating a busy harvest with the only love the flower can deliver nodding petals grin spindly legs buzzing from branches to pistils fresh with an offering.

Dovina 9-Jun-05/3:16 PM
Yeah, if you feel that way, but your metaphor of worker bees loving their queen - well, I doubt it.




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