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Why? (Free verse) by windyone

Why? Do you always criticize because you can't cope? Do you feel better when you take away hope? Writing helps to set us free, it's not just for you,not just for me. Sometimes people are just starting out words can hurt and cut like a knife, be careful my friend to not add to their strife. You don't always know what others are going through, the way that they write is not up to you.

Dan garcia-Black 9-Jun-05/10:41 AM
I liked many of the following phrases and words in your poem but not in the order presented. This is not a re-write. This is only a list. If this list were a real poem, I would have stolen it and made it my own.

Writing helps to set us free
Do you feel better when you take away hope?
Sometimes people are just starting out
You don't always know what others are going through
the way that you write cuts like a knife
you criticize because you can't cope
words can hurt
Do you feel better?
Why?




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