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Haiku String of the Bee (Haiku) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk

Bee on my arm sniffs deciding am I nectar? Decision made Flies away into a day filled with flowering, stamen dripping sweet Legs packed with pollen love for queen dominating a busy harvest with the only love the flower can deliver nodding petals grin spindly legs buzzing from branches to pistils fresh with an offering.

Dovina 7-Jun-05/2:31 PM
I think haiku is not the best form for this. And "love for queen" seems unlikely.




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