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True Love (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi

He has always been so lonely. Because his mind is constantly ill. Ill-hearted of seeking for someone who could love him genuinely and real. But from the moment their eyes have met, he knew he found love that he would never regret. The love that is true, priceless and pure, so precious and gentle that can cure. He just can’t believe this kind of sensation, this feeling he has for her. Looks like an imagination, he can hardly believe it’s true. Now he believes love will change the bad to good. Love will change the worst to great. Love is the opposite of hate, but sometimes it’s your fate. Love may often pierce you like needles, but often enjoyable at the end. From the moment she held his hand, the envied heart was redress and healed. With just one single smile, his misty day becomes so fine. He really thanked God for granting her in his life. But hoping it’s not for fantasy, hope it’s for reality. Because his love for her is eternity.

lil_evil_boi 6-Jun-05/5:46 PM
Thanks a million. Glad that you like this poem.




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