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Snow (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi

Standing under the frozen sky, feeling a fluffy white and shy. Winter brings cold and frosty nights, all you see are candlelights. When snowflakes are falling very clear, it’s a sign that winter’s near. So quietly and peacefully new snowflakes hit the ground, and form a pure white layer and they never make a sound. All the footprints on the white, are cheering us more than bright. Smelling the sweetness of snow, a breeze flies blow and blow. The soft flakes feel like drops of ice when drifting on my face,and everything feels fresh and clean as I walk through this place. The trees are covered with a coat of freshly fallen snow, some have icy branches that give off a crystal glow. The only sound that I can hear is little wisps of wind. But only for a moment then the air is still again. Standing under the frozen sky, feeling a fluffy white and shy.

lil_evil_boi 4-Jun-05/1:38 PM
You may think that poems do not hav to rhyme...but i lyk rhyming cuz i think it enhances the poem. So personal opinions r not welcomed here.

PS(Next time plz do not purposely sabotage my poems. Instead of voting "0" purposely and anonymously, you can try posting your comments. Thanks~)<---for "kev_wannabe"




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