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Slowing - or, A Love Poem with Eggs and Short Lines (Lyric) by zodiac

My love, she has astonishing ways of slowing, when the eggs are done and I'm bug-spas- ming in my skin - and who ever was who liked cold eggs? My love, she tips the change-dish off the curio, when she'd rather stay in she frets, she doffs her dress again or finds my lips not fast enough. She says, don't think me a fool for this; I know exactly what time it is.

zodiac 1-Jun-05/10:07 PM
Well, the ending is her talking, the rest is the guy. Does that help? Or - I meant the part beginning with the second "My love" to be a different day.

For my part, yes, there was a change of heart. Right around the dress-doffing and kissing part.




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