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ReplyTo a comment on Slowing - or, A Love Poem with Eggs and Short Lines by zodiac.

zodiac1 Jun 2005

Well, the ending is her talking, the rest is the guy. Does that help? Or - I meant the part beginning with the second "My love" to be a different day.

For my part, yes, there was a change of heart. Right around the dress-doffing and kissing part.