poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Slowing - or, A Love Poem with Eggs and Short Lines by zodiac.

DoubleU1 Jun 2005

Closing lines:

'Don't think me a fool for this
she says
I know exactly what time it is.'

Unless you consider the two-line consistency a holy must?

'or find my lips
not fast enough. She says

don't think me a fool for this
I know exactly what time it is.'