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In the aspens (Free verse) by sliver

. In a stand of aspens We print poetry Mocking mother nature With silent souls we shout weaknesses Previously unparalleled As honey and dew drips quietly from silent tongues Leaves of every color litter the ground Still, unaware of our surroundings We unwittingly spit on the history Of souls stained like ours Straining against powers We could never comprehend Still silent In this peaceful mountain land

Dental Panic 27-May-05/1:57 AM
Sure. Just center it and it looks like an inscription on a memorial. It's postcard poetry. The voice needs a little reverberation here. The words don't do the job.




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