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between you and me there is nothing (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil

between you and me there is nothing but the two thin layers of perspiration we are slick with this humid evening. slow and raw and tender under the rumble of the ceiling fan memories of the ocean's moving draw us back and forth across the bed, two sea creatures stranded inland. solace is in our fragile oyster flesh and our cool salted skins.

nentwined 24-May-05/7:08 PM
I don't get the "fragile oyster flesh". Beyond that, I think this does what it's attempting rather well.




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