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Eating My Soul (Free verse) by little_big_nose

Eating my soul Your touch is so cold I thought you meant everything You made it into a whole lot of NOTHING Now lets see how you feel You can't stand it because it's real Or will you not even care I bet the fellings were never even there You did a good job, now put away the mask Before you go, I have something to ask Has this hate of yours always been this fine Why am I wasting my time, you're not worth my rhymes

nentwined 24-May-05/6:55 PM
no thanks.




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