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Stranger (Free verse) by Roisin

The smoky dust cloud Whips my eyes shut Just in time. I do not see you Across from me Buying a cheap bunch of carnations. As I rub my stinging eyes You pass me inconspicuously, But drop a book From your loaded worn bag. It falls open at The last page: The bittersweet end of a Melancholy romance. Where two lovers lay dead, Ruined by love.

nentwined 24-May-05/6:53 PM
Very interesting. Simple, with a hint of meta. I think I like.

Speaking of, perhaps there should be an "add this to your favorites" from the poem-vote page...




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