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Blue Executioner (Free verse) by Caducus

I learned of love from moths as silk fell from strip-lights it languished and burned In the coldness of my fixed gaze Life flickered in lights, Dying in its dust. Silhouetted, in a see through tomb. Now I think of us, When I once lived in light And you engulfed me in darkness. Your worm silky touch on trembling larvae that was drawn to your love like moths to the blue executioner. You are a maven and I the learned, who lays stiff amongst moths alive yet paralyzed. Seeing them arrive from darkness, to go to the light and share this bed of silk and dust to be like me, loves rigor mortis.

Dovina 20-May-05/4:30 PM
That's like moving away from America because some people abuse democracy. Sure we have a few characters who regularly give a 10 combined with a comment that means zero. And we have revenge voting - 1 for 1, and thank-you voting - 10 for 10. And we have a few who give a 10 to certain individuals regardless of their poem, even if it is intended as worthless jest.

After you've been here a while, you might suddenly find yourself on the Best list. From there on it gets ugly. But you can see there's no more reason to join the bogus voting crowd than there is to stop voting.




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