DoubleU8 May 2005

What I regret in your poems (which get high ratings, I saw) is your 'hang-up' on certain themes: 'faith', 'darkness', 'otherworld'. It's like you are afraid we won't grasp that the poem is about Faith, Darkness or the Otherworld. Your gothics (and basically any kind of poem) would be enhanced if you sought alternatives to these words.
And again, I dislike those capitals all throughout quite a lot...