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Self Conscious (Free verse) by Damien

Evidently I am feeling self-conscious at the moment I am peeling my emotions away so I am freely showing I am not at all going to beg for mercy as I recite my facts I feel you may attack. At any time you could fight back I think you should do this but through a poem sounding crazy I know you will but I think it will be a “comment” maybe I will one day prove that the assumptions I make are of few I feel this is my purpose, as my message needs you I see there is no message if it only belongs to myself I also see I must spread my love through everything else I realize humans are very hard to get through to I know this because I am a human just like you I always decide to use metaphors. Within my poetry I confuse I, although, can understand the meanings I produce I do not however speak like this in conversation I find the words here are a creation from sensation I use them to embrace the very thought pattern I play And I will one day decay this negative surface we stay For I hold a purpose I cannot share in case of doubt But it is for the best intention of everyone around

Damien 26-Apr-05/6:51 AM
Yes of course I did: you said you thought my poetry had gone down hill because of some reason or other, but how can that be when it is a single poem.It is impossible for all of my poetry to actually have a meaning let-a-lone make sense. I simply enjoy the flow of rhyming words and "hooks". If I choose to only develop this(not a suggestion) it is entirely up to me. Thanks for the feedback.




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